taking a jab at poetry

I felt like trying out sonnet writing myself after I got back from that play.  This one's about Claudius and his reaction the play.  Let me know what you guys think the comments!  I think it turned out pretty well :D

"Thou 'oft thinkest of the evil nature of a King,

thy tyranny so easily can be seen,

if looked upon by the those who could sting.

I am the sting that is not of a crazy mean,

Believing in the strain of the righteous

to justify our mind's angry jabs,

thy play created for the zealous,

vengeance that the good wished grabs.

Created by a man greater than thee,

the man who was the lover of a whore,

her sins be ever remembered by me,

and yet have no doubt of thine precious score.

Anger is the cause of action to greet,

where only in a final battle might meet."